"Madness"

Tuesday 17 August 2010 at 17:38

"Losing"

Friday 6 August 2010 at 13:36

"Drifting"

at 13:36

"Rainbow Fading"

Friday 28 May 2010 at 01:23
Shattered in pieces
Burned to the core
You dismissed me so easily
I thought I meant so much more…

Times that we shared
Love that we made
Yet still you stay silent
As you watch my colours fade…

Words softly spoken
Secrets gently shared
Now suddenly you’re gone
I was convinced you really cared…

Burying the memories
Torturing my heart
Trying hard to understand
How we ended up so far apart…

Drifting through days
Lonely nights endless
And you're still the only one
Who can stop this unbearable sadness

"So bad?"

Thursday 27 May 2010 at 22:47

"The Secret"

at 22:45

"Over"

at 22:44

"Nightmares"

at 22:43

"Null and Void"

at 22:40

"Forever"

at 22:39

"And I Forget"

at 22:32

"Charade"

at 22:29

"The Haunting"

at 22:25

"The Sin"

at 22:24

"Lover Untouchable"

at 22:23

"Lost"

at 22:18

“Only a day”

Wednesday 26 May 2010 at 15:36
“Only a day”

He’s here again
Holding me
Loving me
Tasting me

Eyes piercing my soul
Teeth piercing my skin
Coldness piercing my warmth

Our bodies entwined
As he feasts on my life
Drinking my essence
Filling me with his own

My body moves
In broken time with his

He thrusts
I shudder
He grinds
I moan
He bites
I bleed

As the climax approaches
I see blood lust in his eyes
As they reflect my own
We are one in our rapture

I arch and claw
Forcing him deeper
I am a shameless whore
Offering myself
To this demon upon me
Within me

Then spent, exhausted
We untangle

My body is weak
My mind weaker

Shuddering as the sun
Slowly warms the world

He wipes his lips
Smiles sweetly
And flees to his grave

Again I am alone
Until the moon rises
Returning him to my bed
I have only a day to wait…

“My Favourite Night”

at 15:35
“My Favourite Night”

My favourite night is here again
Children run around with glee
Dressed in Halloween costumes
Innocently come a calling on me

Little hands stretched out grasping
Giggling they cry ‘Trick or Treat’
I’ll give them candy and cookies
So tonight I can taste sweet meat

I’ll venture forth when it’s darker
Then I won’t look too out of place
Appearing from the shadows
They’ll scream as I reveal my face

Children are not my usual choice
Too much they kick and bite
But tonight it’s just too tempting
To give them a little fright

My usual prey is far too busy
Partying in jubilation,
So what else is a ghoul supposed to do
But feast on the younger generation

I know I shouldn’t do it
Eating children, it’s just not right
But I promise its only once a year
On Halloween, my favourite night

“Morning Haze”

at 15:35
“Morning Haze”

Birds sing, announcing the dawn
The sun breaks through
The misty morning haze
Eyes open, mouths yawn
A new day begins
Full of hope
Full of chances
To seize the moment
Live life to the full
All the things people wish for
All the wishes never granted
As the day runs its course
Nothing really changes
As it was yesterday
So it will be today
And no doubt will be tomorrow

"Drowning"

at 15:34
"Drowning"

Just one brief moment
To live a lifetime
To share a heartbeat
To whisper a dream
When you held me
Arms wrapped tightly
I could have died with you
Safe, warm, contented
I wanted nothing more
Nothing less
Knowing you loved me
I could have escaped
From the darkness
Fought my demons
Accepted my fate
But you left me
Lost, alone
With just memories
Swimming around
In my head
Swimming around
In my heart
The tide is strong now
And I know I’m drowning

“Actions speak louder”

at 15:33
“Actions speak louder”

Thoughts flood my mind
Yet the words dry up
Should I tell you
What I dream each night

Your body above me
Moving to the music
Your touch on my skin
Teasing my senses
We move as one
We breathe as one
We feel as one
We are

Then the music stops

Your hands grip tighter
Your body moves faster
Your warmth
Flows through me
Burning my soul
Scolding my heart
Making me scream
Making me

One day I'll tell you
About my dreams
Easier said than done
And actions speak louder
than my words ever can

Until then
Just a look, or a smile
To let me know
That I exist in your world
Will keep my dreams alive…

“A Little Story”

at 15:31
“A Little Story”

Peaceful and pretty, secluded and quiet
They thought it was a perfect campsite
So they parked and pitched up their tents
And settled down there for the night

Laughing and joking around the camp fire
They drank whiskey and sang stupid songs
Talking about how they’d change the world
And how to right its many wrongs

Then out of the woods he approached them
A hunched, stumbling, old stranger
Seeing his face and his wrinkles
They didn’t think he could be any danger

They offered him food and sat him down
Gave him a stiff drink and a smoke
He ate his meal quickly in silence
And then ever so slowly he spoke

“I’ve just gotta say, ‘n I really do mean this
Y’all have been mighty nice ‘n kind
Folks as friendly ‘n pleasant as y’all
Nowadays are real hard to find

So now I’m gonna tell a little story
Guess it’s more of a friendly warning
This ain’t a real good place to set up camp
Maybe y’all should move on in the morning

Cos over there in them dark woods
Maybe fifty or so years ago
Some folks had a real nasty time of it
Trust me, I sure as hell should know

See, two young lovers were out camping
Pretty much just like you guys
But as they were getting nice and cosy
They heard some God-awful cries

They followed the sound of the yelling
As though lost in some kinda dream
But it turned out to be a real nightmare
And they both had to stifle a scream

A couple of bored, restless devils
Were out there fooling around
Growling ‘n a grappling with each other
They tumbled down on to the ground

All red ‘n scaly with horns on their heads
Them kids had never seen such a sight
Wrestling around like hogs in the mud
In the cold, dark still of the night

But then their contest turned nasty
They cussed, screeched, clawed ‘n bit
Watching this unholy, mad scuffle
Sent the poor girl right into a fit

Them devils, they heard the commotion
And turned to see who was near
The boy tried hard to drag her away
But she was frozen real stiff with fear

They grabbed a hold of his sweetheart
And the boy, he put up such a fight
Lord, how he tried to save her
He fought them with all his might

‘Cept them devils were just too big ‘n strong
The young lad was really no match
Knocked down, broken ‘n bloodied
As they ran away with their catch

But this story’s not as sad as it seems
My gal, she still comes back to visit me
Whenever I want her, I just have to ask
I made a pact with them devils, y'all see

I go out ’n find a lonesome campsite
And when they’re asleep I wander in
I’ve gotta be real quiet ‘n real careful
As I peel off their precious skin

See, them devils just love the smell of us
Don’t blame them, cos they stink real bad
Oh but listen to me, I’m a rambling on
I bet y’all think I’m quite mad!

Now there’s no need for y’all to worry
I’ve really quite enjoyed my stay
I told my little story just to pass some time
Hey, why y’all running away?”

“A night to remember…”

at 15:30
“A night to remember…”

Captured by his lustful gaze
In eyes glowing scarlet red
Without a care she follows him
As he leads her to the bed

Lying down upon ebony sheets
Her body now moist and aching
He smiles down at her naked limbs
She’s completely his for the taking

Gently nibbling on her slender neck
She has no will to put up a fight
Feeling the blood pulsing through her
He’s longing to take his first bite

Squeezing and teasing her tender breasts
Hands move down towards her thighs
Fingers seek out her innermost warmth
Deep probing induces deep sighs

This night is all she’d been hoping for
The chance to escape from her pain
Hard sex, swift death and glorious rebirth
Nothing to lose and immortal life to gain

The faster he moves, the louder she groans
Scratching his back and raising her hips
His thirst is growing much stronger now
As he draws blood while biting her lips

He wants to break her body and suck it dry
Her taste is driving him out of his mind
To drink her sweet life, to steal her last breath
And then turn her into one of his kind

Trembling and throbbing, she is finally spent
Now it’s her turn to set a spark to his fire
But as she takes hold she screams out aloud
“What the fuck? An impotent vampire!”

"Bless Me Father"

at 15:28
"Bless Me Father"

The door swings opens
She enters without a sound
I know I should refuse her
But I am helpless, duty bound

I try to bless her soul
As I wait for her to confess
I try to look away
As she slowly starts to undress

And before I can stop her
She's fallen on her knees
I can't send her away now
She's praying hard to please

Her hands take a hold
Stroking me so lightly
Making me twitch and shiver
Gripping me so tightly

Filled with blind devotion
Staring deeply into my eyes
My very own fallen angel
Here between my thighs

My heart starts beating faster
As her warm mouth takes me in
My faith is now forgotten
As I give in to my sin

Her tongue flicks and teases
And my hips start to thrust
My vows are now a memory
As I give in to my lust

I try to reach her moistness
To return to her this feeling
But as she sucks me harder
I can't focus; my mind is reeling

Finally she mounts me
And rides upon my despair
I curse her, I caress her
I start gasping for air

Faster, deeper
Eternal damnation
With each rise & fall
No hope for salvation

I bite hard into her breast
She cries out in sweet pain
Her nails twist my nipples
I struggle in vain

She's taking me with her
To a place I know well
I scream out His name
As I explode into Hell

Used, spent and wasted
Left alone with guilt and sin
I should ask for forgiveness
But don't know where to begin…


(Written as contest entry – had to be about sex in a church)

“I Submit”

at 15:28
“I Submit”

Dark fears surround me
I know you are near
Willing me to surrender
I’ve fought against you
Fought against myself
Resisting temptation
For a lifetime
My heartbeat deafens me
You’re closer now
I run, I stumble, I hide
Still you find me
And I finally submit
You smile for a moment
Enjoying my shame
Then the dance begins
My body trembles
Aching to be used
Aching to use you
I cry out for salvation
With every thrust
Again and again
Harder, faster
Again and again
An unholy union
Secret, deadly
I scratch
You bite
I scream
You drink
My heartbeat slows
Becomes quieter
My soul flees
I am lost forever
Blood flows freely
Onto bruised lips
Parted, eager
My mouth fills
I have no choice
I swallow

“The Hunt”

at 15:27
“The Hunt”

The full moon rises
In a velvet black sky
Casting unholy light
On unholy life

The hunt has begun

Roaming the streets
Feasting on the innocent
Feasting on the sinners
They’re all the same to him

A howl breaks the silence
A scream swiftly follows

No fear, no remorse

Blood drips from furred jaws
Blood drips from sharp claws

Thinking he is forever safe
Arrogance dulls his senses
Blinds him to the shadow
Lurking close to his own

She moves as he moves
Deadly through the streets
Following fresh blood
Following his scent
Waiting for the moment
When she can end the chase

Appearing before him
A vision to his eyes
Another victim for the beast
He growls
She smiles
Sharp fangs glisten

Still he does not realise
The smell of death is hers

Claws ripping through cold air
He pounces
He misses
Too fast for him, she laughs

Again he attacks
Still fearless, still oblivious
To the gun she holds
Until he feels the agony
Feels the ecstasy
As the silver pierces his heart
And he finally returns
To the man he once was
Looking for her forgiveness
The tears burn his eyes

Remembering her lover
The mortal life they once shared
She kisses his neck
Bites through his tender flesh
Death is shared, love rekindled
Tomorrow they will hunt together

“Bound…”

at 15:25
“Bound…”

Night falls
Moonlight shines
Kindred call
Hard to resist
The need to feed
To drink, to love
Can’t walk away
Can’t ask for forgiveness
No one can help
Just another lost soul
Bound to walk in darkness
Bound to find a willing victim
Just a brief encounter
A taste of life
A taste of blood
A taste of fear
Always the same
Dawn approaches
And again I sleep alone


(This won a contest on MySpace)

"In Control"

at 15:23
“In Control”

Sliding in sweetly between my warm moist lips
Hard, throbbing, I guide him deeper within me
Plundering my body, I open wider for him
Shuddering, trembling, I explode, contented, I am fulfilled
I wipe him down and switch him off…


Written for a contest a while ago.
Criteria was : an erotic piece written in 5 lines, 8 words in each line

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